goodnight through the flames, under the stars... inside this head... a song plays... sacred... lost... cult... a gun and a plan... a gun and dreams... shot... to hell, burn 'em all... end it, end it please... why can't we be... better enemies... why can't I escape this perfect world of put on a smile, plastic faces... in their seats, they clap... over and over again... year after year... their lives do the same thing... what else could they have done... why didn't they listen to the voice... that screams for... this to reach their eyes... he shatters dreams, takes them away... lights up a cigarette and plays a guitar he never has... he writes... and who is he... will he kill you and all you've ever dreamed... because the plastic's melting... the mind's coming through... and all the nights... all the sleep... can't write this... but I can... and I... did... goodnight... www.yoanowns.com/anundergroundworld (http://www.yoanowns.com/anundergroundworld)

Poetry is a wonderful thing.
Just 2 words of advice.
1. Use some different punctuation to make your point.
2. On this forum you will get laughed at, flamed and insulted for posting anything like this.

:x

On this forum you will get laughed at, flamed and insulted for posting anything like this

Nah... He/she posted something without secondary motive.. just a random expression of self.. I think this person is pretty safe.. most people around here are pretty savvy and see through veiled motives..

Might get some critique on the poetry.. but not flamed.

*sniff* *sniff*

I smell spammer

Nah... He/she posted something without secondary motive.. just a random expression of self..

I guess you didnt notice the link and the nearly identical post in NAG.. poetry pisses me off!! If you want to say something just fucking say it for gods sake.. Dont confuse me with wilting flowers and pudding and foam and all that shit.. just tell me you wanna buttfuck me or whatever and get it out in the open.. Jesus Fucking Christ.

Master Damoiel Mindbend
Retired Enchanter of the 60th Season

Thank you Damoiel. I know you just insulted him to prove me right. You're a true friend. *hugs*
:o

Owned (http://pub142.ezboard.com/bayonaero.showUserPublicProfile?gid=anarchistla1)

Psh Taino I didnt insult him, I insulted POETRY! :) Therefore, my comments in no way reflect my opinion of you or your superior loving of my anus :) cmere

Master Damoiel Mindbend
Retired Enchanter of the 60th Season

I agree, poetry for the sake of poetry is retarded. Mostly because some jackass, probably French, person will inform you that it's the most beautiful thing in the world, and you're just to stupid to see it.

Now, if you throw a few lines together to get your girl all hot and bothered, that's one thing. But if you write about how your soul is tormented and the world is nothing and all is black....then you're a fucking goth and should be hunted down and eradicated for being utterly, utterly useless.

Zehn, truer words have never been spoken.

Gothics are bad, mmkay.

Hey, what the fuck, let the dude express himself.

Most people need some way to express what they feel, or to channel their shit into some sort of thingamajing so they feel they're progressing.

Me, I do it by kicking people in the head, much akin to the "Martial Art, like any art, is an expression of the human being" quote by that chinese dude that like, kicked people too. Plus, sometimes I get to really, REALLY hurt people.

Anyways, whether you choose to do it via poetry, sports, "arts" or farting tunes, it's not strange to want to express yourself. It's a fairly basic human need. Says the guy who also write poetry :/ Hmm, maybe I'm trying to justify my inherent sissiness with inflicting bodily harm upon people... ah well, their loss.

'I agree, poetry for the sake of poetry is retarded. Mostly because some jackass, probably French, person will inform you that it's the most beautiful thing in the world, and you're just to stupid to see it.'

- Oh the IQ.

kivorn.. grappling 1on1 soon? =)

Sweet, it's been awhile since Halo's quoted me. I was afraid I was slipping. 8/

Fear not Zehn!
You still remain high in my heart.

Was that a homoerotic proposition Hubbe?
I'll think about it ^^

By the way, LotJ hombres, stop dodging me on ICQ. I'm feeling lonely :(

Im not dodging you, just haven't booted it up in a while.
I'm in the process of moving home, so everything's "up in the air".

Ya halo got kicked out of his moms basement =( sucks to be kicked out of your home at the age of 42! =(

I never had your ICQ Kiv :(

And poetry is a wonderful way to express yourself. I do it with pictures, others do it with poetry, prosa, martial arts or videotapes. But they all express themselves, they create art or they simply find a way to get over things.
Some people think thats stupid. but some people also never get over their problems in life. And then others never ever think about their life at all.

my name is Jon and I wonder how it would be to fuck an old person, like a very old person, like a 90 year old person, a nice wrinkly pussy or ass...it'd be an ok thing

A quote from his webpage.

Scary Shit (http://www.yoanowns.com/anundergroundworld/survey.html)


How odd.

Dear lord.
Ok, flame on!

If you poop on the curb, you might cause someone to slip

That's some deep shit man, some deep shit.

i spoke to the owner of this persons domain and his host..

shes gonna go tell him to stfu and if he does it again she takes away his webspace in two seconds flat.

I look at <a href="http://www.yoanowns.com/anundergroundworld/conversations.html" target="_new">this</a> link on his site and get the impression that if the psych-killer in the movie "7" had been a retard rather then a deep philosophical individual, when they found all those notebooks in the guys apartment, that's what it would look like.

you mean if the killer was johny depp, instead of kevin spacy?